Why, why did you do that? you told me that you were my best friend and i trusted you on that. you betrayed me. sorry but i have to get rid of you.'' I pulled out my dagger and forced it right through his chest. his flesh gave way to the metal tip of my dagger like police gives way to a V.I.P. i felt the bones of his rib cage shatter under the force of my dagger. the dagger stopped. the tip punctured one of his lung.
he was still struggling for his life. i frowned an ugly frown. i looked here and there at last i found an axe near the fire exit. Ah ha! i exclaimed. i took out the axe and swung it as fast as i could. CHOP!!! out came his head and i kicked it towards the dustbin.
i had blood all over my Nike shoe. i stood there for a while repenting on what i had done. i wasn't repenting on getting my hands bloody or killing someone i trusted. i was repenting because i had a blood stain on my new Armani shirt. blood stains are hard to get rid off. i looked at the big clock in front of me. it was 1530 hrs and cops reacted fast to the blood flowing outside the building.
i took out my AK-47 out of my black leather bag and checked my reflection in the metal. i knew that it was now or never. i ran outside and started firing at the cops blindly. the empty shells fell on the ground making a clicking sound. the rapid recoiling of the gun made my arms feel numb.
after some time i lost all my nergy and fell on the ground. my heart was thumping as fast as a galloping horse. i placed my hand on my chest. i thought that my hand was wet. when i looked at it, my hand was covered in blood. i staired at it till my pulse went zero.
in hell i asked Lucifer that why did god made my heart beat so fast that it started pumping blood out side...
Lucifer laughed like a bad guy in some movie made in 1970s while he was making a kebab out of me.
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The fool didn't know that he had been shot...
he was still struggling for his life. i frowned an ugly frown. i looked here and there at last i found an axe near the fire exit. Ah ha! i exclaimed. i took out the axe and swung it as fast as i could. CHOP!!! out came his head and i kicked it towards the dustbin.
i had blood all over my Nike shoe. i stood there for a while repenting on what i had done. i wasn't repenting on getting my hands bloody or killing someone i trusted. i was repenting because i had a blood stain on my new Armani shirt. blood stains are hard to get rid off. i looked at the big clock in front of me. it was 1530 hrs and cops reacted fast to the blood flowing outside the building.
i took out my AK-47 out of my black leather bag and checked my reflection in the metal. i knew that it was now or never. i ran outside and started firing at the cops blindly. the empty shells fell on the ground making a clicking sound. the rapid recoiling of the gun made my arms feel numb.
after some time i lost all my nergy and fell on the ground. my heart was thumping as fast as a galloping horse. i placed my hand on my chest. i thought that my hand was wet. when i looked at it, my hand was covered in blood. i staired at it till my pulse went zero.
in hell i asked Lucifer that why did god made my heart beat so fast that it started pumping blood out side...
Lucifer laughed like a bad guy in some movie made in 1970s while he was making a kebab out of me.
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The fool didn't know that he had been shot...
6 comments:
congrats on making the blog...hope you keep on writing more and more :)
You need a boost in the grammar man... little things make big difference:)
Take care!
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hey nice blog bro! :)
hehe! :P making a kebab eh!? lol! good
and take Nothingman's tips seriously! :P
-Jeevy
@ nothingman
thanx for the tip bro...
i didnt edit it...
@ jeevy
so you like the 1st story. khool...
ill take his tip bro...
rock on...
good work done by him..keep it up!!a 5 star blog..
@ neelanjan
you got that right
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