when I opened my eyes, my eyeballs fell out. I was in a big room full of things which belonged to the late kings in the 19th or 18th century. The chair on which I was sitting was so huge that if you wanted to lift it you would have to take the help of at least three men. There was a huge table in front of me dressed with all sort of food. On the opposite chair there was a guy sitting in darkness. His cloak made him look like bat man or Dr. black jack but he didn't have the shiny bat utility belt nor the freaky anime hair style.
As the guy opened his mouth a grimish voice asked me whether i was enjoying my meal or not. ' well I don't think that any one can enjoy his meal in a room dark as hell and specially if they are dragged into it.' I replied. ' no one dragged you here, in fact you came here by your self.' said the anonymous guy followed by a train of coughs.
Without saying anything else i picked up the folk and knife and started to cut the delicious looking ham in front of me, but i soon lost my apatite when i herd the noise f slurp, slap, ting-ting and finally a huge burp. I dropped the knife and folk and got up. 'sorry dude but I have to go home now. thanks for the dinner.' After saying that I hurriedly got up from the chair and ran towards the nearest door thinking it to be the exit. Hold on. you still have to see the next level. said the grimish anonymous voice. As I looked behind the guy in darkness got up pushing his chair behind. The moon light leaking in from the roof dropped in on his body and I could see him clearly but his head was still in darkness. His cape flew to his right side. He was wearing a white shirt which was same as the french people used to wear back in the time of the french revolution. the black leather shoes standing on the metal base and the striped trouser in black and white made me feel like taking my last breath.
I closed my eyes and darkness grew in again.....
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Enjoy your freedom while you can....
Sunday, March 16, 2008
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4 comments:
I like the way its written because you are so raw...and there is a long hard road to walk :) but the journey is cool :D
ok two feedback points.
1) Do a spell check before publishing.
2) And read a few novels, see how they use the punctuation in sentences, also use some space in the paragraphs, it makes them easy on the eyes for reading, and not like blocks of text.
Though, I must say,you got a whacky imagination!:D
The eyeball line was a killer!
Cheers.
N
This one was good. Keep it up!
@Nothingman
Lolz... thanx man... ill keep em in mind
@pattyAnne
You bet i will...
lolz...
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